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  Quote Swift Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 02-Aug-2010 at 3:38pm
Originally posted by Anna Raven

Swift, those tips really helped, and I haven't even really studies them that much yet! I never realized you shouldn't hatch with curved lines, I think I had been doing that a lot, because I'd been sort of following the shape of my contours with them. Also the line weight issue.

I really wish I had a teacher or two who would've given me these kind of tips. Thanks a bunch! I tried to use them some in my latest piece, Wasp.


My partner out and out disagrees with my methods, so for what its worth, the advice will vary wildly depending on who you ask.  He firmly believes in wild non-linear shading, which drives me bonkers.  If you have any questions or need advice, I'd be happy to help.

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  Quote marhawkman Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 02-Aug-2010 at 5:42pm
Magneto's helmet is the main thing that looks wrong.  the rest is okay.

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  Quote Anna Raven Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 03-Aug-2010 at 2:38am
I was kind of sloppy on that one. It did not turn out the best in my eyes. :-/
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  Quote Kipe Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 03-Aug-2010 at 5:59am
Love Wasp, Magneto reminds me of Joe Mad era Magneto, Fin Fang Foom is fine but I feel like something could be done to make him more dynamic. Maybe more shading on both him and the background or something? I don't know.
 
Oh and I concur that Medusa would both be a lot of fun for you and for us!
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  Quote Swift Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 03-Aug-2010 at 3:55pm
I like the Wasp drawing! (Even if I'm not a fan of the actual character).

One comment is on the Magneto drawing, but you might find helpful for future drawings: Magneto's arms extend too far down.  On an average human body,  the elbows reach down to the bottom (sometimes a little lower) of the ribcage.

http://blogs.abc.net.au/photos/uncategorized/2009/04/24/human_skeleton.gif
For skeletal reference work. 

I had made comments on human musculature but it's hard to work without a visual component:
http://esoriano.files.wordpress.com/2007/05/human_body.jpg
and for back muscles:http://www.healthyflesh.com/wp-content/uploads/2009/12/human-body-muscle-diagram.jpg

I see you've started hatching and crosshatching more!  Keep up the good work!

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  Quote marhawkman Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 03-Aug-2010 at 8:20pm
Hmmm... Fin Fang Foom is not a snake.  His back apparently bends in much the same way as a human's would.  Maybe a little more but not that much. 

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  Quote Anti-Limbo Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 03-Aug-2010 at 11:37pm
Wow! Your women are very solid. Oh and Doop looks great too lol.
20 years later and I'm still waiting on the Hell's Belles to show back up.
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  Quote Anna Raven Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 04-Aug-2010 at 5:24am
I think I tend to women better because it's easier to do them with less detail, and I tend to do soft curves better than hard angles.

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  Quote Gibbering Fool Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 04-Aug-2010 at 6:46am
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Hmmm... Fin Fang Foom is not a snake.  His back apparently bends in much the same way as a human's would.  Maybe a little more but not that much. 
 
This is true, however I actually like this less than human rendition of Fin Fang Foom.  It makes him a bit more alien and animalisitc.
 
I'm glad you're taking my requests on board (Mimic and Fin Fang Foom) Big%20smile.
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  Quote marhawkman Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 04-Aug-2010 at 3:48pm
That's a large part of why he has such an interesting head.  His torso is the most human part of the character.

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  Quote Gibbering Fool Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05-Aug-2010 at 3:59am
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That's a large part of why he has such an interesting head.  His torso is the most human part of the character.
 
Well I would actually disagree and say his legs and arms are also very humanoid.  I like that Ron's sort of got him walking up on his toes too, like certain dinosaurs.
 
I see the Medusa that's gon up, I like it, though she looks a little ditzy.  She's twirling her hair and looking up into the sky.  I would expect Medusa too look a lot more serious and regal.  You did a good job on the facial features, I just don't think they're showing the right emotions.
 
 
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I have two more requests for ya... Enchantress and Meggan

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  Quote Anna Raven Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05-Aug-2010 at 5:54am
I guess in regard to Fin Fang Foom I am trying to make one or more small adjustments to the characters, my own spin if you will. I always thought if Fin Fang Foom is a dragon let's make him a dragon! Why does he have this human torso? But yeah I can understand your point marhawkman - and I realize by injecting my own personalities into the characters ala Medusa I run the risk of detracting from their essential character. Then there is the fact that I am doing this late at night after a full day's work, so sometimes I am just being lazy. :P

Well anyhow - I will try to do better! Your comments inspire me to do better in fact!

Speaking of Medusa - her giraffe-neck was bugging me ALL DAY! So I uploaded a revised version tonight. Go check it out.

Enchantress will be a lot of fun arsenalloaded!

Oh also, I can't believe this thread made it three pages already! You guys rock! Here is the website again since it's been buried once more:
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  Quote Gibbering Fool Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05-Aug-2010 at 10:30am
I think I need to request a goofy looking picture of Hercules, like my Avatar.  And Just to challenge you again, Galactus' Herald Stardust would be interesting.
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  Quote ianbetween Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05-Aug-2010 at 11:01am
Hey, your work is absolutely fantastic and it's so good to see a fan art thread with some legs on the site for a change :) Keep it up!
 
Oh and I draw too - posted most of these before at one point or another I'm sure but if you're interested in taking a peek I've some stuff up at http://ianvincible.co.uk/?p=118
 


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  Quote ianbetween Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05-Aug-2010 at 2:37pm
I meant to say, my favourites are Husk, Valkyrie, Kitty and Namora by the way. Love Namora's pose. :)
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  Quote marhawkman Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05-Aug-2010 at 3:33pm
Hmm...  FFF is often drawn standing on his toes.  Why is he semi-humanoid?  Um... because he's an Alien from Kakaranthara and not a real dragon?
 

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  Quote ianbetween Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05-Aug-2010 at 3:51pm
Hey Marhawkman, just being nosey and followed your link and it takes you to a blank page?
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  Quote marhawkman Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05-Aug-2010 at 5:31pm
the board tags have an annoying habit of dropping trailing )...
 
 
there it's fixed.

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  Quote Gibbering Fool Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 06-Aug-2010 at 3:03am
Originally posted by marhawkman

Hmm...  FFF is often drawn standing on his toes.  Why is he semi-humanoid?  Um... because he's an Alien from Kakaranthara and not a real dragon?
 


Please loose the snide tone. Ultimately Ron can draw these characters anyway he wants.  He could put Fin Fang Foom in a tutu and give him an extra head if he wanted too.  Its all about practice and not about directly replicating a character.
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  Quote Anna Raven Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 06-Aug-2010 at 5:11am
It's cool Gibbering Fool. I asked for critique, so I don't mind people expressing opinions. :) But yeh, I may not draw every character as everyone would want to see them. Maybe I will do a more traditional Foom later though, he was fun to draw!

Did not do a request tonight, I did The Vision, but I'll get back to the list soon.

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  Quote ianbetween Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 06-Aug-2010 at 9:31am

Thanks AnnaRaven, loving your one a day challenge it's like having an Advent calendar, keep up the great work :) Might try something similar myself when I have a bit more time.

I have a request. Warlock from the New Mutants...he's always either really fun or a massive challenge to draw..or both!

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  Quote marhawkman Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 07-Aug-2010 at 11:57pm
Enchantress came out great!
 
@Anna: Thanks for taking it the right way.  It's pretty much impossible to please everyone.

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  Quote Anna Raven Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 08-Aug-2010 at 4:56am
Thanks marhawkman. Gibbering Fool! I did a Herc for ya! If you like it, maybe I could color up the face.

Edited by Anna Raven - 08-Aug-2010 at 4:56am
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  Quote Gibbering Fool Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 08-Aug-2010 at 5:35am
Great work man!  The pose looks a little awkward, but you did a reat job on the face and the shading.
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